Dear IHAI Community,

Just wanted to say hello,
and to invite you to show no mercy. 

you know, I can't read your minds.

I have just upload a new campaign made for visitjamaica.co.uk. It will hopefully land me a place at Dandad workshop this fall.

Hope you enjoy it!

Hey Voiteque, thanks for sharing your work!

Can't say I'm digging the pirate-talk, but a bigger issue I have is that it doesn't seem... different enough. You seem to wanna position Jamaica as a pirate adventure of some sorts (as opposed to a vacation where you lounge beachside all day, sipping planter's punch on a resort in Negril) but aside from a few AR videos of activities slightly off the beaten path, I don't feel any more adventurous than before I saw the ad. It also seems like you're using AR "just cuz". Send me to a website that immerses me in a different type of Caribbean vacation, one that captures the spirit of the days of pirates sailing the Golden Main (bobsledding and Rastafarianism are a little too new to attach to a colonial pirate theme)

Push further. Read up on Jamaican history from those days. The White Witch of Rose Hall gets my sense of adventure going more than a lesson in patois does (you can get the latter just about anywhere)

Hope this helps!

Spektak1, thanks for the input, some valuable remarks :)